Before I awake
I can feel it in my bones
Rain is on the way
That cold raw feeling
Seeping into every joint
Latching on to stay
What can make me warm
A blanket, some soup, or tea
Fuzzy slippers too
It brings a message
Reminding me to slow down
Nature’s in control
I admire your application of the haiku structure to your stanzas. As for concept and sentiment, I also make comforting use of rainy Saturdays. I enjoyed this.
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Thank you.
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We had a rainy morning too. This poem fits it perfectly.
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You have captured that feeling of a rainy day so well! A good day to slow down. In Chicago, it’s snowing. [sad face]
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We’ve had no snow this winter here near Philadelphia. ☹️
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